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A contest entry
- Haiku Me by azure85.
600 points, ended May 5, 2008, 35 entries
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Im not sure if you were going for traditional poetry, your 2nd verse has 8 syllables rather than the 7. It still is a very strong poem. A very nice read, thank you for it
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thank u
thank u for the comments given to my ku. I normally don't do ku's, cause their more complex, but needed to do more to be a better writer. Haley27
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Few words yet very beautiful! Wonderfully penned! Thank you so much for sharing!
Spreading some love,
Miley -
Ooh nice I didn't care much for the font though
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thank u
thank u for the wonderful sentiments given to my ku. Haley27
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