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Unseen


Blink
and all you
see is a
yesterday
of memories
never made.
The what could
have been

you think about
so often alone.
The smile
you missed.
The tear you
never wiped
away.
Lips offered
untasted.
Eyes
always closed
to love.

A contest entry

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  • Tigris
    May 31, 2008

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    Never realize there was so much we miss in this world when we close our eyes, and even if it is barely a second of time. Thank you for your entry, it was beautiful.


  • Topaze gold member
    April 28, 2008
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    A very well written piece. My best wishes in the contest.


  • Cannonsfire
    April 28, 2008

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    Such sadness in this, but someone may actually open their eyes and see what they are missing, we all need a chance. Love, C


  • michellemybelle gold member
    April 27, 2008

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    this brought tears to my eyes. sometimes love is a taste that never touches another, yet leaves the lips, so close, yet unreachable.
    wonderfully said!
    blessings,
    Michelle