Don't want to waste this moment
Of such a beautiful day
The warm sunshine prickling my skin
The soft breeze caressing our
Intertwined hands
Liquid sunshine in your eyes
Staring at me intensely
Like you'd never leave me again
Not today..
The quintessence of our love
Is all that matters
In our field of spring
Author notes
option 5
A contest entry
- Teen Girls Only.....Please & only for those with little to no trophies!!! by Nature Song.
575 points, ended May 3, 2008, 4 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ♥give me love♥ options!♥ by Fallen-Phases.
450 points, ended December 15, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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short, but very sweet, i really liked this
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I realy like this piece, especialy the line "liquid sunshine in your eyes"
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In a field of spring new love is found! Like that hint of a young summer's love bloosming...Good luck in my contest! ~Sie
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This is so cute!!! I love the imagery and love in it. The theme is so good!! Great job and best of luck in the contest!
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"liquid sunshine in your eyes" what a lovely concept. Great imagery.
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