Plush greenery, God's finest display
Waters to ease the angst and soul.
Yielding its beauty for many and much.
Oh, what a delicate, demure-lite touch.
Soul's surrender inclined toward itself
As it beholds with inner vision what's left.
Succulence staged as if by invisible hand.
Primped and proper, an Oasis in the land.
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt by Pollycheck.
450 points, ended May 11, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Overlook made up words
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I love how you rhyme the last 2 lines of each stanza, but not the first 2. I think this works really well. x
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Thank you for entering my picture prompt. i agree the seen beauty that was crafted by the unseen hand can be very beautiful.
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Trew' much so...magnifico...thanks for the review
lol
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Very nicely done. My best wishes in the contest.
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thank you so muchlol
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a good poem, good alliteration used here to makes smile stuttuer in the sky's succulent soft sensations.
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yes, the four s's, or five, you're really neat to get five s words in one sentence. Talk about alliteration heaven, wowlol
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lol i have a full poem that begins with i
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