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Reindeer Aerobics

Bells are ringing early this year,
what is happening up there?
Through the crystal sky so clear,
you'll see reindeer everywhere!

The deer have lazed too long,
their condition now so poor.
Something has to be done,
and the elves know a cure.

A hoove right and one left,
Watch out for that hill!
But reindeer can so deft,
crash and stand up still.

Music floats around the castle,
and the antlers are ligned up.
Beginning with much hassle,
the reindeer try to hop!

They follow elves' instructions,
run and climb and fall.
Then rise back up again,
Finally ready for nightfall!

Even Santa has joined the fun,
laughing and bouncing around.
Preparations have begun,
and echo through X-Mas town.

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Written December 16th, 2003

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  • smileywinks
    December 22, 2003
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    Thankyou for entering!
    I loved reading this peice!
    I really am enjoying all of these wonderful enteries! Including this one!
    I'm wishing you a Merry Xmas and a Happy New Year!
    Again good luck honey in this my first contest!
    XOXO Veronica


  • Ava Noire silver member
    December 18, 2003
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    LOL How funny to imagine this actually happening. A reindeer trying to keep up with the aerobics and falling nose first into the snow

    Enjoyed reading!


  • Samplette gold member
    December 17, 2003
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    echo through Christmas town..I like the thoughts of that.
    Thank you for entering.
    sam