there were times
i loved you,
nymph among lilies, on
nights that stretched to no end
beneath shrouds of stars.
Author notes
i'll revise this later, when i'm not confined to twenty words.
A contest entry
- Lost Love Letters by Ephiphany.
450 points, ended April 30, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
i love criticism.
Comments
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Oooh, this was really pretty. I love how you use lilies pften in your work- they're so beautiful and creates this soft, elegant feel to everything. And you used the word nymph, which is totally amazing! I love that word, and I rarely see it used anywhere. Another astounding write, m'dear
Jeanette*~
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Lovely entry you have here...
thanks for entering my contest and best of luck to you.
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For all that, I like what you've written. It's short, simple, and beautiful.
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Considering the restrictions, it's a good effort. I'll keep an eye out for review.
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