Come fall into the arms of love
Where your soul will warm
And two hearts become one
Where memories are made
And love still exists
Come fall into my arms of love
Where touch will bring you chills
and kisses never stop
Where moments last forever
And won't be soon forgot
Come fall into my arms of love
Where promises are kept
And lies don't exist
Where love still lasts your life time
In my arms, Come let me keep you warm
Author notes
I can't help but being me, I do like it when it just pours out and I don't really have to think about the poem, If I can find a Chorus I may make this a song.
Please tell me what you think
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Just a touch of love is all most of us ever need. Beautiful words creating lovely feelings...mal
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Awesome is probably not the best adjective I can find, in praise of this beautiful poem, but this is Awesome!!!
~ Peace and Love, Your Friend, Cyn
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god damn it pisses me when in a bad mood I read that uplefting and brings smile, thanks an F-ing lot, lol...........joe
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I love really romantic poems about the wonders of giving yourself over to love. This sure fits that category. Well done, a breath of fresh air this morning.
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nice
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charlie the words aren't bad ,but some of your spelling needs to be checked and if you are to make this a song,you need to rearrange the words so they come together more smoothly,so they make sense,ok
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Wonderful flow of your thoughts...your words give the feeling of a sense of security of being found in arms where the warmth leaves no doubt of the love for the one being held within them. I think you could make this into a wonderful lyrics of those that I have read of yours it wouldn't take much as your seem to have a natural talent to make them flow nicely.
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This is very sweet. Just a few thing, "memeries"=memories, "into the my"- did you mean 'into my'?, and "love still last"= 'love still lasts
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