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Ethan's Rapture

By thirty, Ethan was painting
lilacs between her thighs
digging deep into tar

trying to grow something more

while pretending love came from
vaginal crusades and conquistador escapades

Another lit cigarette burns
    the horizon [that he inhales]
as he writes SOS with smoke
watching life fall apart

like little ashes [and semi demigods]


Years become clockwork hallucinations
spent slipping through cigarette smoke
and praying to fire
and the special spot between her legs


Home is where the head is

and he's another dream
in a sinking city,
writing life stories in skid row

and finding rapture in rap music

and solace in the smile he drew
on a hand grenade

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  • LadyUnique silver member
    May 8, 2008

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    i like this into the finalist list it goes it's getting crowded there so i wish you lots of luck