Water swirls
like thoughts
in my head,
then, tumbling
they cascade
into smooth
lines running
down
the page.
Author notes
Beautiful picture...I am by no means a photographer...
I always cut off people's heads etc.
Thanks for an inspiring shot~
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt by Pollycheck.
450 points, ended May 11, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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So few words, yet so much power! I absolutely love this, its got such beauty to it. Best of luck to you x
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Thank you for entering my picture prompt contest. I have felt the same way with the words swimming around my head, but for me they continue in a whirlpool way too often.
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Very well written. My best wishes in the contest.
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Ooh, nice. I like the simile and the idea of thoughts Cascading onto the paper.
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