This long and weary journey
Draws finally to an end
Drained and crawling slowly
A new life shall begin
Looking back from whence I came
Memories spin within my mind
Weak but stubbornly strong
I turn, leaving my past behind
A contest entry
- Pic Inspired PIF.(semi quickie)........ come see! by kiwigirljacks.
850 points, ended April 28, 2008, 8 entries
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Comments
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Very Nice
Good imagery, I like the rhyme in the second verse.
Keep up the good work!
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An overwhelming sense of being weary from the hardships in life but then ending with a sense of renewal and determination! Great take on the prompt
Thank yo
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