The trees crash down,
washing away the dirt
leaves and sticks fly by my body,
allowing my body to feel intertwined with the air.
I know my soul will soon be let free.
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Oh, it is dark in that nature way...
very real,
made me think!
Very nice write! -
natureful yet pretty cool.
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Captures the feeling of the storm very well.
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Wow, this was very powerful. I loved all of the imagery used. awesome write.
XXCrimsonRaineXX -
moving!
A very powerful poem. the whole poem is really good but its the last line that pulls it together perfectly.
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short and sweet! i like it! -B
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short but meaningful. How one event can lead to another
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A Tornado
I like your poem
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lol
I am not a tree! Jeezzzz.. you really should like... read in between the lines... I am a storm.. or part of it.... mmmmmhmmmm -
are u a tree
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