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Bitter Anguish

  Never ceasing pain
      of love
   
    ~unreturned~
     

    heart
      >pierced<
 
      by promises
          (of deception)

      wanting my mortal heart
          to stop beating -^-^-^------

      while veins of agony
       
        ~s-t-r-e-t-c-h - t-h-r-o-u-g-h~

              my 
                s
                  h
                    a
                  t
                t
                  e
                    r
                  e
                    d 
                      soul.








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  • Darkwell
    November 22, 2008

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    Short and powerful i especially love the heartbeat WTG Good luck in the contest


  • Kassandra Nyktos
    April 27, 2008
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    wow...that was gorgeous. lovely write ^^