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Worm-ku

Tiny fuzzy worm
Why do you sleep on my shoe?
Oh snap you are squished

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  • Jasmine Rayne
    April 28, 2008

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    lmao Good one Bails. I like the

    "Oh snap you are squished"

    lol Great Haiku. ^_^ The title's equally fabulous. "Worm-ku". Your hilarity is improving young Padowan. lmao LOVE YA!!






    -Lily♥


  • Yemassee gold member
    April 27, 2008

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    Well he decided he needed some shade so he decided to sleep under the shoe...fatal mistake! I think you need to start an entire worm-ku contest!


  • individuality gold member
    April 27, 2008

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    a good piece of poetry you have penned - and the worms they enter my brain thank you for entering and good luck