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Kills The Mood

Oh his touch makes me
Pulsate with such strong desire
Until dad comes in

A contest entry

I love him ♥

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  • Yemassee gold member
    April 27, 2008

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    Lets hope you mean your boyfriend and not your brother, lol. Sorry that is a bad joke. But your haiku is much funnier.


  • individuality gold member
    April 27, 2008

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    a good piece of poetry you have penned - a good piece though it is not funny, in fact i find it quite sad. thank you for entering and good luck