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Cautious Blink

Cautious Blink

By: Julia L. Clark

 

 

As I forecast my word weather storm.

I hear the sounds of deep breath

Fear and dried up storage tears

Beating in heavy rain smiling

In thunder. This whole economy

Of prude eye lashes and mental

Pause hot flashes gives me

A reason why, to pursue

My mental bypass of

Nervous fear to blink.

The sink drainage and the

misquoted apostrophe

Word grammar president

Law is a damn flaw

Because the amendment

Of the blood that shed

From the corners of my eyes

Is cataract to the younglings

Who don’t know the proper

Right to insight is to, save

Your eyesight and open

Your eyes and learn

your surroundings

And take a deep breath

To your headline CNN

News is file, I need

No television set

To know if

I close my eyes

Onetime and

Blink my body

May be floating

Some were stinking

Why your idiotic

Mind is jamming

 To the broke up

Music group Nsync .

 

© Julia L. Clark Registration Number TXu-331-190, All rights reserved

Author notes

Cautious Blink

If I have to explain
This then that
Tells me you are
Truly Lost.

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  • Tigris
    May 31, 2008

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    It's rare to see so much packed within one poem, I loved your interesting style and the words you choose work so well together. Thank you for your entry.


  • Mizz HighHeel Class
    April 28, 2008

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    i love this! one thing i always appreciate about your deleverance is you always make one think you have a old soul to you i have always told you that nice job


  • Topaze
    April 28, 2008
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    Very well done and just packed with message.


  • toomysterious
    April 27, 2008
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    Totally original. I like your style, and your sass.


  • individuality gold member
    April 27, 2008
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  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 27, 2008

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    Amazing...

    You have so much wisdom within you my beauty queen, you can also express that insight you have crystal clearly with intellectual thoughts that flow from a heart of tenderness and woes.. You know how life goes, and you make it worth the living for me. It's always a pleasure to read you... In your youth, you have told such truth way past the years that have shed many acid tears. Love you, and I wish you all the best forevermore......... Mushy.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    April 27, 2008

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    Well I guess i'm lost!

    hell who cares? This is wonderful piece that takes the mind on a trip, then returns it- not exactly as it took it. So what? lots of luck in the contest!

    • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
      April 27, 2008
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      u gaming you know what it mean if not you better not blink because if you close your eye's for one second it can be lethal you so sweet

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