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Beautifully Blue

Blue...not just a color.
An emotion so vile.
Yet the color so cool.
The thought makes me smile.

Soft and quiet
upon my walls.
But hard and hurtful
upon my mind.

A contest entry

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  • PonyPride
    May 7, 2008

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    I liked this one a lot, it was cute and yet powerfull with trut, I liked the simplicity of it. One change I would make, however, would be to the last line. maybe upon mind's calls..idk.


  • toomysterious
    April 29, 2008
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    Love what you have said here, another beautiful poem for a beautiful color.