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I wish you weren’t so far away

I no longer have to lie or pretend to myself
or walk alone through life hurting and crying.
I know that we are together
because I still feel the warmth of your body
but I yearn for your touch
as I sleep in my bed.
I wish you weren’t so far away.


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  • SomeonesToySoldier gold member
    May 5, 2008

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    Its sweet, very simple, but gets the point across. Kinda short for my tastebut tis still good. Thanks for entering it into my contestand good luck.


  • DeAnges
    April 30, 2008
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    Short and simple, but good.