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what did i do?

what did i do
to make you so mad?
you say we're not friends anymore
but i dont want to believe you

you avoid me in the halls
like we were once dating
but we wern't
we were just really close friends

i cant stand it when you dont talk to me
but you wont answer any of my notes
i ask you if we can just be friends again
you never reply

its weeks later
and i still dont know what i did
but i regret whatever it was
and i wish that we could be friends

i can already see it
its months later
you still haven't forgivin me
for the things i did so long ago

its years later
we've grown old
and i still fall asleep thinking
thinking about how you never forgave me

how i loved you once
but as the years went by
the love slowly
very slowly, started to fade away

its many years later
i've moved on
and as i slowly walk down the aisle
i see your face

i know  it is fate
as i grab the bread off the shelf
you grab my hand
you tell me your sorry

sorry for all the years that went by
when you still didnt forgive me
you kiss me
and i know that i am forgivin

its years later
our son and daughter are running around playing outside
we know this will last forever
and we hope that we forgive that day,
and not years later





Author notes

the first 4 collumns are real. the reat was just thought up in my head. i hope it doesn't take that long 4 him 2 forgive me.lol

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  • crazymomma
    April 27, 2008
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    I hope it doesn't take that long either. Just one thing forgiven not "forgivin".


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    April 27, 2008

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    This is indeed a thought provoking piece ...you have portrayed the the story of your heart bringing the dreams and truths together at one place..quite powerful verse is here...