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Haiku 122

he'd had a good trip
but only found the bruises
when he was picked up

Author notes

That distant sound from the direction of Japan is Basho spinning in his grave.

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  • Yemassee gold member
    April 27, 2008

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    LOL, you should win for the best author note! Funny stuff, well if he turn over for your poem, mine made him turn right back over again, lol. maybe that is why Japan has earthquakes...oh my what a horrible attempt at a joke that was.


  • individuality gold member
    April 27, 2008

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    a good piece of poetry you have penned - i am forever tripping and finding myself oicked up! thank you for entering and good luck