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Slap


despicable
such a disgrace
slap across the face





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  • 2lullabyhaven
    May 1, 2008
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    Wow, this is goodlol


  • Yemassee gold member
    April 27, 2008

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    You must be related to every woman I've ever known, because that is what they say and do to me on a fairly regular basis. Hey, they ask me if they look fat, and if they do, I say yes, why do they slap my face for telling the truth?


  • sanity
    April 27, 2008

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    hmmm I thought you might come up with something for this....lol your piece reminded me of what i would like to say and do to my ex.....lol.... expertly penned my friend hugs and love Linda xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx


  • individuality gold member
    April 27, 2008

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    a good piece of poetry you have penned - i do like slapstick humour lol, thank you for entering and good luck