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i'm the boss, the king (Senryu)

i'm the boss, the king
in my house i'm number one
except for my spouse

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  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    April 28, 2008
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    ha ha! Lovin it! very cute


  • catz Moderators member
    April 27, 2008

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    Okay, boss, just so you know where you stand This is very funny Congratulations on the Gold

    Dee


  • heartnsoul
    April 27, 2008

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    well you are number one in her heart...and you are number one here!!! so two out of three ain't bad!
    congrats!!!!
    Michelle


  • MelodiousDreaming
    April 27, 2008
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    Haha, very nice


  • Melodies
    April 27, 2008
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    HAHA!! Very funny and oh my gosh... YES!


  • Yemassee gold member
    April 27, 2008
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    congrats on the gold!

  • Yemassee gold member
    April 27, 2008

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    Reminds me of some comedy show where some athletes (after losing) started chanting, "We're #2!" Not even the King of your castle...I know what that is like!

  • aaaaaaaa
    April 27, 2008
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    haha this is good, made me laugh.


  • individuality gold member
    April 27, 2008

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    a good piece of poetry you have penned - lol yeah we like to think we rule the kingdom but we are just slaves to the real mistress. thank you for entering and good luck

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