Lovers twirl like iggets,
falling on their asses, *flop*
Crying the way home....
Author notes
iggets - meaning idiots
You're right, very hard indeed. Haiku is suppose to be about seasons, I think...
A contest entry
- Okay, Haiku! by individuality.
600 points, ended April 27, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What to do in an insane world?
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Very funny... would make a good cartoon. 
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Congrats on the bronze.
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I think here in Maine we say "idjets" but I can't spell so I could be wrong.
I must he a horrible human being for laughing at the couple falling on their butts.
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LOL... I love this Haiku! Very cute and so well done!
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aye haiku is but senyru is about human nature
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a good piece of poetry you have penned - ah love, yes, it makes fools of us all, thank you for entering and good luck
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