Distant sound mid morning hush,
glistening water flows to rush.
Lost in thought paradise found,
splashes within my mind resound.
Inhale beauty nature gives,
peaceful heart where yesterday lives.
Picturesque falls fill my mind,
leave the hustle and bustle behind.
Come sit beside and feel the mist,
nature's beauty sweetly kissed.
Cares tossed aside we gaze upon,
as sounds of springtime drift beyond.
Hand in hand enjoy the wonder,
rushing water swirling under.
Sounds that sooth and mesmerize,
inhale this splendor before our eyes.
Author notes
Picture taken by Pollycheck in Upper Michigan and is a picture of Tahquamenon Falls located in The Tahquamenon Falls State Park
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt by Pollycheck.
450 points, ended May 11, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Congratulations
Sandy on winning the Gold Trophy for you beautiful poem....Katie
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Good Morning Katie. Thank you for your lovely comment. Always a pleasure to read your thoughts on my poetry.
Take Care,
Sandy
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awww Sandy this is beautiful
love your background too...congrats to you on the Gold so well deserved ~blessings always~ Trisha~
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Lovely Comment
Good morning Trisha. Thank you for the nice comment. Always appreciate your words.
Bless You,
Sandy
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Great rhyme - not forced at all. And this flows really well, i could almost hear the mesmerizing sounds. Best of luck x
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Beautiful! I have been to Tahquamenon Falls and they're wonderful and breath taking! Well written poem. Full of imagery and makes you feel like you're right there at the waters edge. Great job!
Spreading love,
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Thank you Miley for this lovely comment. I appreciate you stopping by.
Bless You,
Sandy
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A lovely picture
That is graced with poetry that enhances the work the All Mighty has set befor us to ease the everyday tension we seem to carry every where we go...mac
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Good morning Mac. Great comment. Thank you for always reading my poetry. You take care and have a great week.
Bless You,
Sandy
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Beautifully done! I loved everything about this! The words, the flow of the poem and the story you told. Great!
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Lovely Comment
Thank you my friend. I appreciate your thoughtful words. Always brings a smile to read your comments. You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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Ohhh I love waterfalls and to sit by a river and just listen to the water moving along. It brings such a sense of peace too me. Beautiful imagery throughout. I so loved this thanks for sharing my friend.
Theresa
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Lovely Comment
Always a pleasure to hear from you my friend. Thank you for this lovely comment. You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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A very lovely and descriptive piece. My best wishes in the contest.
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Lovely Concomment
Thank you for the lovely comment. I appreciate you stopping by and reading.
Take care,
Sandy
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What a beautiful and inviting write. Your words make one want to come sit along the bank and just dangle the feet into the crisp cool water. Great take on the picture a beautiful picture promted a beautiful write.
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Thank you for entering my picture prompt contest. You have painted a very beautiful and serene picture with your words. This write is a job well done.
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Thank You
Good Morning, Your comment was lovely and I thank you for having this lovely contest. You have a wonderful day.
Take care,
Sandy
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aha, I see that now as well as the nice background.
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Sandy
Another splendid write with a mellow touch and a fine flow. A perfect fit with the graphics. wonderful as always
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Nice Comment
Good Morning Bob. Thank you for stopping by and reading my poem. I always appreciate your thoughts my friend. You take care.
Bless You,
Sandy
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The rhyme is always well done and moves with the feeling of not being forced. The picture beauty allow the reader to grasp the wonder painted in words. Spring drift to the swirl of rushing water.
Clear and moving texture of the poem shares a sound aspect for full thrust of the work.
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Good Morning. A lovely comment my friend. Thank you for readsing and commenting. Always nice hearing from you.
Take care,
Sandy
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hello my lovely auntie
This is a sweet piece. Just a little problem here : I don't see any picture here as you mentioned in your author comment there is.
Love you and wish you luck in the contest.
Shahrzad
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Thank you Dear Niece. It is there now.
. I am a little slow today. Thank you for the lovely comment. You take care. Auntie Sandy
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