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the little death

le petite mort
the little death
in the crushing cold
a boiling breath

a bony hand
reaching out
unable to understand
then...  a galling shout

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  • Tattboy silver member
    November 21, 2008
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    Brilliant! Says so much with very few words.

    Well done.


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    April 28, 2008

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    hmm i remember the little death as being the french phrase for orgasm, but anyway this is a great little poem, i like it alot,
    keep writing,
    i love this,
    Elektra xxx


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    April 27, 2008

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    Deep dark and mysterious. Wonderful writing. I like this a lot. The flow is wonderful.

    Wayne Leon