in every breath I take,
there hides a thought of you
sometimes I wish it was my last
cause it hurts worse than my biggest fears
once appon a time I thought,
it was till death do us part,
forever and a day
guess that's one of my many mistakes
sometimes I wish I could just hold you
let you know that it's ok
smile at you and kiss you
cause it's forever and a day.
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i love this poem,
shows deep sorrow of the heart,
keep writing and keep your head up high,
no matter what life throws at you,
xxx love Elektra xxx
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Even in this I found darkness. This again was deep and really full of emotion. You poured yourself into this piece and it showed. Keep writing. You have a talent. Keep using it.
Love
Wayne Leon
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u WeR WrOnG!!i dOnT lYk DiS!!...i LuV dIs!! once appon a time I thought,
it was till death do us part,
forever and a day
guess that's one of my many mistakes
DaT wAs My FaVoRiTe PaRt!!U gOt SkIllS!!i KaNt WaIt 2ReAd MoRe Of Ur WoRk!!!
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once appon a time
thanx for the comment. you are more than welcome to comment on all my works. it's dark and emotional but that's just how my heart is at the moment. checked out some of your work. i think you might understand. i'm in a rocky relationship and this guy hurts like hell but i love him. that's the problem. mwa!!! (all the way from south africa) -
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InO hOw U fEeL!!i LuV eM bUt IdK hOw He FeElS!!bUt...YeA wEn EvEr U wAnT mE 2cOmMeNt Ur WoRk Jus LeT mE kNo N i WiLL!!
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once apon a time.
ive got new dark poems on. will luv 2 find out what you think. will go check out your new work if you want me to. mwa mwa mwa!!!
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