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I Listen


I sit here and I listen
to the never ending falls
to the sound of the waters
that tumble to the ground

All the churns and bubbles
they occupy my mind
And all the swirls and pools
bring serenity so kind

I could sit and listen
this whole day away
Such a soothing beauty
It makes everything okay



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  • Sandygram silver member
    May 12, 2008

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    Beatiful Poem!!!!

    Congratulations on winning the Bronze. Your poem was lovely and the imagery stunning. A pleasure to read this lovely spring morning.

    Take care,
    Sandy


  • Katie Lazette
    May 11, 2008
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    Congratulations

    For winning the Bronze Trophy for your wonderful poem...Katie


  • Arizona Sunset
    May 11, 2008

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    this was such a beautiful poem congrats to you on the bronze blessings always~ Trisha


  • LeilaJayne
    May 10, 2008

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    Great imagery in this, good take on the prompt, its a very beatiful write. Best of luck in the contest.

  • Judith Chandler
    April 27, 2008

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    Yes, that is definitely the sort of place to go when you are feeling down.

    I like the flow of your piece, very nice.
    jjj


  • Pollycheck
    April 27, 2008

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    Thank you for entering my picture prompt contest. You have captured the eseence of how I felt the first time that I saw the beauty of this falls.

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