I am
Endless power
Resisting gravity
A secret waiting to be told
Priceless
I am
Dead in my heart
Pleading for an answer
Stumbling around in my mind
Alone
I am
One too many
Invisible to her
Pressed flat against the hallway walls
Vanished
I am
A locked journal
An unsolved mystery
Kept hidden from the human race
Secret
Author notes
they tell about the accident....from my point of veiw
mkay randommm...good?
Comments
1 - 9 of 9
-
I agree with Girl In The War, my favorite stanza was:
I am
One too many
Invisible to her
Pressed flat against the hallway walls
Vanished
So many images flashed through my mind when I read that.
Very well written! -
I don't know the story behind this but I like how it is almost like... snapshots of different states of being? Not knowing the story allows me to put my own interpretation on the different parts. I enjoyed this the most:
I am
One too many
Invisible to her
Pressed flat against the hallway walls
Vanished
The idea of describing an idea of being invisible to someone that way is brilliant. -
btw why does no one besides you two come on allpoetry anymore??
-
i like the second one the best the third one makes you sound lesbian the first one is weird the fourth one is pretty good.
-
-
haha lesbian?....i guess it does. haha im not i promise. its about the fight with clare. and what do you mean by the first one being weird?
-
-
invisible to her???
-
-
you, clare...these are about the fight...except the first
-
-
really??
-
-
yes. i said that in the author's notes. lol
-
-
-
Adding your comment:
1 - 9 of 9
