I have another home that I will live in one day.
It's in a beautiful place really far away.
There are fields of sunflowers as far as the eye can see,
where all my family and friends wait patiently for me.
No pain or suffering in the place I'll call home soon,
only peace and love and nights under the full moon.
But for now it is here I am happy to stay,
for it's not time yet for me to go away.
There are no roads or trails to get there even,
only God's angels can take me to my home in
Heaven.
Author notes
I invision heaven as being such a beautiful place full of happiness.
A contest entry
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just like i said before lol
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it makes me feel better about what may come when u die so its really good and comforted me that you
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Thank you for your kind words.
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beautifulllll ^-^
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Thank you so much. *smiles*
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butiful crafty ...n sunflowers are such a butiful flower .... x cheeky x
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You can't help but smile when you see a sunflower cheeky, they're so big and bright and cheery.
Thanks for your nice comment.
Hugs,
crafty
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Such a wonderful vision of heaven you gave to me here. It is a place where there is no more pain and suffering. Your mention of sunflowers made me think of my friend Julie. She loved them too.
Thank you for sharing such lovely words with all of us and I look forward to more. Best wishes for you in the contest also. Love and God bless, Joyce 
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Thank you Joyce for your wonderful comment. Sunflowers are one of my favorite things. I am glad it also made you think of your friend too. Thank you again. God bless,Cheryl
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wonderful flow to this almost heavenly. sorry I just had to say that. Great poem. thanks for entering
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Thank you for your nice comments. I am tickled pink...this is the first thing I have won..hehe *smiles*. This made what has bad kinda a bad news day a good news day.
Thanks
Cheryl
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