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Should have told her

I hope someday
you find love
like I feel
right now
standing
next to you.

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  • bluecollarlove
    April 27, 2008
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    Our song

    Elevator music , a man named Otis , And true love


  • Melodies
    April 27, 2008

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    I can imagine someone saying this in an elevator... and the beautiful woman looks shocked, but then she smiles and it is a toothpaste commercial. Big sparkles come out of her grin. A cool poem, totally.