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Someone New

I've met someone,
way better than you.
He does stuff
that you wouldn't do.

He spends time with me,
in which I love.
He holds me in his arms,
like a little baby cub.

He doesn't hurt me,
like you used to do.
He cares about my feelings,
unlike you.

I've met someone,
way better than you.
But thats just because,
I've met someone new.

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  • Deceits Tears silver member
    May 1, 2008
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    Wonderful write,


  • hardwire
    April 27, 2008
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    amazing!!!

    I feel exactly the same at the moment. my boyfriend hurts me and then there's chris...

  • amy86
    April 27, 2008

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    this is interesting? do u mind me asking is it true? i split with my boyfriend friday just lost my temper now dont know what to do, another excellent piece x


    • Garnet08
      May 1, 2008
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      yup! all my poems express my feelings. so you can tell how i felt when i wrote this poem. but yes, this poem is all true!