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Once the Choice Was Mine

Whether or not I would get involved
Whether or not I would be thine
What I'd choose to do about all this
And once the choice was mine
But that time just seems so far away
Now that word's slipping out
If I don't do something, then they will
Of this I have no doubts

That awkward scenario's inevitable
One way or another, it'll come

I'll have stressful conversations with many
All of which will end negatively

And I'll lose you forever more
Due to the current situation

I'll fight the urge to cry at nigth
Because none of this is in my control

And somewhere's a world where you'll love me
Be there to catch me when I fall
I once had the choice to live in that world
And now I have no choice at all

But once...

The choice /was/ mine

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written 4/9/2008
@ 9:11 am
by Erin

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  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    August 31, 2008
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    A Most beautiful composition--Well crafted with honest and sincerity--Well Done


  • Corinthians13-4
    May 9, 2008
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    I love that. Can really understand what that feels like, like most of what you write. You have a typo in the 5th stanza. Nigth should be Night. Other than that, I loved it. Great job