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If this is love


As our eyes meet and our thoughts combine
a myriad of rainbows filter through,
Kaleidoscope of colours, yellows, reds and greens
Purple, orange and pearlescent blue
enveloping my heart giving me a pinkish glow
if this is love then I want to know.


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A dedication to my man of mystery

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  • PonyPride
    May 14, 2008
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    nicely done with good flow but I wanted more focus on one color