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Purple

Flowers blooming in a shade
awesome to behold,
full of life and color,
Beautiful and bold!

Purple, the royal color,
deemed fit for Kings to wear.
Midnight at it's darkest;
Purple, the color of despair!

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  • toomysterious
    May 4, 2008
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    I was speaking to the contrasts. In colors as well as in people and relationships, there are many sides, the color of beautiful flowers and royalty, can also be the darkest midnight and despair. Thank you for your comments.


  • PonyPride
    May 4, 2008

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    great job here, lots of flow and beauty but I am confusd on the last line. It appears to be happy and then your saying its despair?


  • jcat gold member
    April 29, 2008

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    What a wonderful little piece!!! You did a great job with the imagery and the flow!! Very well done and best of luck here!!