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Shades


Colors of the rainbow
upon the skies they glow
gentle colors of soft pastels
stories heaven never tells

Green, yellow, blue, and red
shades of each dance in my head
Orange, pink, gold, and rose
and any variation of all of those

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  • PonyPride
    May 12, 2008
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    I think this has potential because of the emotion and imagery but it lacks flow


  • toomysterious
    April 29, 2008
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    I am fond of all the colors, too, really enjoyed this read.