At the end of the rainbow
Do you know what I see?
I see a playground made of candy canes
and dragons drinking tea!!
At the end of the rainbow
Do you know what I hear?
I hear a leprechaun
and roaring deer!!!
And if I found that pot of gold
Do you know what I would do?
I would go to the store
and buy myself a flute!!!
I would play a happy tune
that would be really fun!!!
Then I'd give some gold to
everyone!!!
A contest entry
- Ages 12 and under: THE END OF THE RAINBOW by Sky Prince Ireland.
500 points, ended April 29, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Oh, good luck in the contest chick!! You have a cracking poem here. I notice you have been working hard while you have been away on your poetry... Well done x
Say hi to you mam for me
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Awwwwwwww thisone is so sweet....a sweet fairytale...so many people would become greedy and keeping it all by themselves...but not you..
You have a heart of Gold and it shines right through this poem
Lovely sweetie
XXJeannette
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Niash Ma eno from all your Children
Rhyme and flow are good, and the idea behind the poem is a very good dream realm I would hope exsisted, Good Work!
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UBsAngel Niaish Ma Eno From All Your Children
LOL very cute and creative Thanks for sharing this piece. Love it.
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Niaish Ma Eno From All Your Children
Magnificent piece You have written and the images so vivid
Really enjoyed this!!
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooo~~
Precious~~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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This is a great poem.
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Niaish Ma Eno From All Your Children
Wow what an amazing write you are so talented at such a young age! Such warmth and hope within your beautiful poem. Good luck in the contest
Niaish Ma Eno From All Your Children has left some love on your page Theresa
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Niaish Ma Eno From All Your Children
Bravo, young poet. One of the most imaginative writings I have ever read. Very happy & positive stuff. -
*accepts gold* Why thank you! lol This is a really cute poem that put a smile on my face For one so young this is a beautiful poem. Good luck in the contest and niaish for sharing.
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Thank you!
You are the youngest poet whose work I've seen. I am glad that you were willing to share it. Thank you for brightening my day.
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Awww os cute. I haven't fouynd my rainbow yet. This is so very sweet. Niashi for sharing your poem. Niaish Maeno from all your family has left some love on your page my little friend. Niaish for sharing with us here.
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That is a very lovely poem you have written. Keep writing and learning more for as long as you find it fun and enjoy what you do. Niaish Maeno from all your family has left some love on your page my little friend. Niaish for sharing with us here.
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Thank you for the gold you have already shared. May you continue to write your poetry. Niaish Ma eno from all your Children is sending love upon your page.
Peace in light and love
Noah
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Wow. You are really good for your age, did you know that? And you can only get better with age, my friend. This was really cute.
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JUST BEAUTIFUL
Your words flow like magic and blows fairy dust everywhere...there is a soft sweetness as you have painted your canvas of words...pulls a little sigh and has to read it again*wink*
Niaish so much for sharing the smile with me today..."Niaish Ma eno from all you Children" has left some love on your page and hopes a little smile as well*hug*
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Oh this is lovely! Simply amazing! You have a clear vision of what you think's at the end of the rainbow and you express it well. Thanks for sharing and entering it in my contest. Good luck.
Brian
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