Silver glowing of the moon,
The sparkle of silver tears,
The coming of dawn is soon,
To chase away my fears.
Silver threads of light,
Weave through my darkened dreams,
Soon my heart will feel right,
Pieces of me drifting, down silver streams.
A contest entry
- The colors of our world by PonyPride.
900 points, ended May 15, 2008, 16 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I've reread your poem a few different ways and tried harder to understand and I arrived at a new conclusion........... tho I still find it a bit jumbled I do appreacheate the creativity and flow. thanks and I will place your poem as third
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Great Stuff!!
Less is more...
I love that you can say so much in so few words...
Great imagery, rhyme scheme & flow...
Another great write you have here...
Well done!!!
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hm.. tho your words were creative, no doubt they lacked structure and more relavence to silver
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Lovely use of the word and the color.
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very cool... one of my color i love to used in drawing,,, Silver threads of light weave through my darkened dreams,,, wonderfully pen... Love the poem keep up the writing good luck in the contest..
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