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Victim

V iolence promised in your smile even as gentle hands caress
I nvading, penetrating; I am naked, though fully dressed
C alculated whispers chosen for my inexperienced ears
T aking my youthful innocence and destroying it with heavy smears
I n your touch I tremble as I feel my face go hot
M ade a victim of your perversion, and yet I know it not.

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  • jinglingjoy
    February 27
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    good

    naked, stark, bones, real, cold truth, well done emotions are plundered

    well said


  • DropDeadLEADER
    February 26

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    Wonderfully Daunting

    The theme of it screamed at me as I read through the painstakined words. I loved how it invoked real, raw emotion. Thank you for this wonderful poems!