I hope you know,
I never want you to let go,
I know I've had many chances before,
But all I need is just one more.
You and I both know what we want in our hearts,
And I wish we could build up enough confidence to bring out into the
open.
Because...
This is for real,
I've learned from my mistakes,
and have built up so many regrets,
But please lets just make this last time,
One that both of us never forgets.
I know we took one step back,
But lets take two steps forward.
Atleast now we are getting somewhere.
Its taken me a long time to figure this out,
It has made me now overcome my fear.
Believe in me,
Just this one more time.
Because...
This is for real,
I've learned from my regrets,
But please lets just make this last time,
One that both of us never forgets.
I swear this is the last time I need a last chance,
Because you won't hear from me again the donts and cants.
So fall back without a worry,
I'll catch you in my arms,
And we will forever live in this love story.
Author notes
New song. I think its one of my best ones.
A contest entry
- lost love vs love by xxCodykinsxx.
455 points, ended June 1, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Should I record it and upload it?
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It sounds like you really trust this person and that you really enjoy their company. The only thing that I noticed is that at the beginning it sounded a little like you were begging them to take you back. I mean I dont know if that was your intention but that is sort of what it seemed like to me. But otherwise it shows a beautiful dedication to that person which is something that is rare and hard to come across. great job and keep up the awesome writing!
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*So fall back without a worry* Trust is a must when freeing falling to waiting arms. Record and upload New song. Obviously one of your best.
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hmmm
a true poet is the poet whose words are full of emotions love, and companionship, and you portrayed that character, and I applaud you for a great piece of true love story. Good job, I have been there before and knew exactly what the other felt, but sometimes it never end the same
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Humm..this is the real love story where there are many and many turns and bringing the hopes and disapointments as well..you have touched the truth of life here..well done..
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This is like describing one of my situations that i'm in. i agree that this is a very good song. i wish i could express stuff like this so easily, but i can only express cutting and suicide flowingly. Good job
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beautiful write. I love the lines
"I know we took one step back,
but lets take two steps forward".
especially towards love that's beautiful!!
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beautiful.
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this had a very great romantic feel to it dear i think taking steps to face something together especially love is a good step nice poem
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