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Kill Me Dead

why kill me dead

i'm tired of all you have

too much sorrow in this land

why kill me dead

so why kill me dead

peace is all i seek

i support you though i'm weak

why kill me dead

so why kill me dead

my hand is on my heart

your hate rips it apart

why kill me dead

so why kill me dead

reach out to me now

i'll help you and teach you how

why kill me dead

so why kill me dead

look inside your soul

break up through that hole

why kill me dead

so why kill me dead

look inside yourself and hold my hand

i'll take you to the promise land

why kill me dead

so why kill me dead

you and your hurtful word

i held my soul out for you until what i heard

why kill me dead

so why kill me dead

you must love me like the devil

and he is at your door

why kill me dead

 so why kill me dead

i don't love you anymore

why kil me dead

so why kill me dead

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  • FreeFalling911
    April 27, 2008

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    this is my favorite. I love how you repeat "why kill me dead, so why kill me dead." it makes it more dramatic and makes everyone think more about the words you are saying in your poetry