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Oh Cello

somebody quick grab a cello
a violin just won't do
please grab a hold of that bow
move away and give me some room

take that bow and slide out a tune
is should be slow and sad
just let me sit across the room
i need my cello when i feel bad

nothing can sound so sweet
as the cello when played well
set it close to you between your feet
play it for me until i melt

listen to that beautiful sound
it always makes me cry
when the keys are perfectly wound
the lulling carries me so high

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  • eternitydemon
    April 27, 2008
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    oh! i love this poem because I love cellos! and it has such a nice flow!


  • Cyber Artist Moderators member
    April 27, 2008

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    Great work

    I love cello especially with ice-cream sorry couldn't resist this was a bunch of fun I do love the cello it has a very soulful sound I don't get to play with them much sadly. I love a good quartet but the wife would get mad lol seriously I have always been fascinated with strings and the sounds they make. fun read
    cyberartist


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    April 27, 2008

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    Very beautifully written!
    I love the emotions and imagery
    in this piece. You did a great
    job with it and thanks a lot for
    sharing it here! Keep up the
    wonderful work!




    Jeremy0826