you think i don't know?
think i can't hear?
you wonder why i cry at night,
that should be clear.
you act like you don't know,
just please don't play dumb with me.
you wonder why i'm mad?
i wish you could see through this storm's debris.
this heart's been farther than the eye can see
this life's been ruined more than you'd believe
you wished you knew,
i wish you'd care
A contest entry
- Poetry, Poetry and PreWrites! by Lost Vampyre Angel.
1200 points, ended September 13, 2008, 336 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
so... what do you think? please be completely honest. i'm open to criticism...
Comments
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Such a sad and gripping piece, emotions flow very well here. Thanks for entering and good luck
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Makes me want to cry.
Reminds me of people.
Even though the reason is pretty damn clear.
And i know they know. -
liked it alot... keep it up x
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