Courage throws caution to the wind
and I fly to forbidden realms.
Struggling, freedom seeps upon the page
as my pen breaks the thongs that bound the thoughts
to ride upon a wilder curve,
and I feel naked truth upon my skin.
Rules and restrictions tug my mind,
but sighs sing freedom's song,
and I travel on,
to where my mind has never gone.
A contest entry
- Poetry and Freedom...quick contest by Peteskid.
600 points, ended April 28, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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very well done, the spirit of the theme of freeedom and expression so well described in imagery here...breaking bonds, and the concept of the page is well done to the extended imagery written expression... a strong statement here...PK
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Aw, poetry
written to heart and not restrictions.
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Such freedom here! To go where the mind has never gone! Trip of a lifetime! Beautiful work!
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You blaze far horizons very bravely in this freedom loving verse. I know I depend on your courage in storms for encouragement.Right behind you Poetess where ever and whatever strange new realm you journey off to. Ha!
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siss
sweet Di u never stop from impressing me 
just wow and wow and wow
1000 wows more
i adore this piece loadsss
good lucks in da contest sis
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