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Lover''s Gift

Missing image

Single rose came
Card had no name,
Sweetness like a kiss
Gently pressing his lips...

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Prompt 1. rose

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  • jahschosen
    April 27, 2008
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    Sweet

    Simple and sweet! We all like surprises (sometimes) especially if its from the one we love and /or desire. Something to always give us flashback as we walk down the street or enter a place. This is what this poem reminder me of a simple act that has a lasting effect.


  • GregTheWang
    April 27, 2008
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    Beautiful use of 15 words. Curt but full. Love it. Good luck in the contest!


  • crimsondew
    April 27, 2008
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    OH! that is so pretty..All the best!


  • nilav
    April 27, 2008
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    the nameless love is sweet and beautiful....