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A Dancing Jewel

A nymph, young, sensual and free
going through the stages of pubescence
absorbing life extraordinary
Wings transparent she emerges fully grown
beautiful, desiring to make her heart known
Her instinctive wisdom to perform all delights
she will hunt you down, and show you the sights
She has an insatiable appetite for love and lust
and to ply her skills is a certain must
Her long wings glisten in the morning sun
and her slender body is known for fun
Yes, the emergence of the dragonfly this dancing jewel of the sky
Is a resemblance of all females, especially you and I

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  • jackysunshine
    May 6, 2008
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    Beautiful

    Loved it


  • Ithica silver member
    May 3, 2008
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    There is something very tantalizing about this coming of age poem... Definately a tranformative time. Young ladies are both sweet and innocent and raging infernos at the same time... With proper guidance, things will usually turn out fine... without? Like holding a lit firecracker in you hand when it goes off... some very powerful repercussions!!!

  • Asdzaa Nadleehe silver member
    May 3, 2008
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    Fantastic imagery...
    Best wishes with this entry..
    Many blessings
    ~A~