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A Kiss...

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As I kiss your sweet lips
    rosy and full…
Your eyes they do peer
    deeply within mine…

Join with me, my love…
Come with me…
Follow me to the chamber,
    the chamber of our desires…

For it is there,
    that your lips so full,
          shall be filled with my desires for you,
              and with my own…

Join me, m’lady,
    for it is now…
The objects of our desires,
    shall be made one…

Again…

© Jonathan Wikkins April 27, 2008
All Rights Reserved

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Picture credit, Gustav Klimt

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  • NurseChilly gold member
    May 5, 2008

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    very very nicely done.. this has that touch of sweet surrender and the intimacy of a kiss. well done

    and many thanks for this entry in our contest
    G.x


  • MysticalRayne
    April 28, 2008

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    This is wonderful and your imagery is extremely sharp and to the point ~ best of luck in the contest


  • Corvus Corone
    April 27, 2008
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    I think Gustav Klimt would have wholly approved on your take on this. Awesome write


    xxx Jem