As I kiss your sweet lips
rosy and full…
Your eyes they do peer
deeply within mine…
Join with me, my love…
Come with me…
Follow me to the chamber,
the chamber of our desires…
For it is there,
that your lips so full,
shall be filled with my desires for you,
and with my own…
Join me, m’lady,
for it is now…
The objects of our desires,
shall be made one…
Again…
© Jonathan Wikkins April 27, 2008
All Rights Reserved
Author notes
Picture credit, Gustav Klimt
A contest entry
- In the Eye of Klimt by NurseChilly.
1400 points, ended May 6, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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very very nicely done.. this has that touch of sweet surrender and the intimacy of a kiss. well done
and many thanks for this entry in our contest
G.x
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This is wonderful and your imagery is extremely sharp and to the point ~ best of luck in the contest


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I think Gustav Klimt would have wholly approved on your take on this. Awesome write
xxx Jem





