To Kneel in submission
is to give my whole self.
To make certain
His life is as easy as possible
While i am taught
obedience,
self assurance
self discipline
and the life skills to serve.
i am the way i am because of
the power that comes from Him.
His hand, eyes and rules
are what corrects my wrongs.
i am His gift,
He is my treasure-
life begins and ends with Him.
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ummm this is interesting.
It has this religious undertone, but it still can be talking about something else. I dig poetry like that, it can mean a hundred different things to different people and only the poet truely knows what they are trying to say, but everyone else can still take something from it.
This is random but it reminds me of any Foo fighters song...I had the chance to see them live...and it was fun watching everyone sing along to the lyrics. You see I might see one song about love but the person next to me might see it as about death.
Thanks for allowing me to be random
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So humble if you;re speaking of God which I think is the right interpretation. It's hard to do. I hope it benefits you, would you agree that only God can give a person peace?
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hmm
i dont get it, might you elaborate for me please? and the first word in the 15th line, 'life' might wanna change it hun.
is it about god?
or a boy?
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It could be about God but it's not. I'm not really a religious person. It's about BDSM and the relationship dynamic I have with my Master.
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wow
afellow slave who really understands the desire to submit and serve
An awesome write, it really touched me and made me realise how i have slacked off a bit in the past few months, fortunately my Mistress is very patient
Great stuff, keep it coming
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i'm very happy that your Mistress is patience with you. We all have our off times...but as long as you know your place and what it is to submit it's ok!!
all my best
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