I counted love
many a time
sighing on "He loves me"
and whisked away
on purity's petals
replying aroma's sweets;
Releasing no's
that broke the heart
and here, forever, we remained
loved on Daisy's lane.
Author notes
TEN LINES OR LESS.
prompt:"Daisy" by Craig Tuttle, from www.art.com
A contest entry
- Daisy - 10 poets, 10 lines by Mallig.
900 points, ended April 27, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Well, you just kicked my a**! Those "no's" are troublesome, no?
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This has quite a tender sadness, so well expressed. Thanks for this entry! :f
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very great piece you penned here i think the competion you are in better be careful with this piece good luck
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This is beautiful...such a lovely ending..All the best!
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thank you very much
thats right kind of ya
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