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Unseen

Tides of life swirl round me
Unceasing, gentle ripples
I stand against the current.

Unwilling, to succumb to the flow,
Deciding against the normalcy,
I like the feeling of singularity.

The feeling of being completely alone.
Just me, against a depthless ocean,
Upon a rock just big enough for one.

I gaze up at the crowds of stars,
Seeing all, and dreaming of tomorrow,
Where, time ceases, and the sun cries.

Following the path of the moon,
My soul treads lightly,
A solitary dance, to unheard music.

My heart holds the secrets of the world,
And I stand, alone, and gather them
Into little silken clumps of colour.

I am, just me, one dreamer
Against a world of reality,
And I am unseen.

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  • Naridill gold member
    May 3, 2008

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    I like the images you poem presents to the mind. Calm and self sufficient for such delicate moments.

    Thanks for entering,


  • mysticstorm gold member
    April 27, 2008

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    Lovely flow and wonderful take on the prompt...very touching and strong in it's moment of oneness...as there is a special quality in being you and just you...perfect ending...
    Best to you!