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punk love..

oh my love, oh my dear
what i give you is so dear
oh my love, oh my dear
what i give you is so dear

love you dear, just so, dear
love you dear, oh so, dear

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just a part of a song I changed a bit..
"punk rock love"
from The Casultes

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  • judy011
    May 2, 2008
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    not so bad i like it


  • VerminVomit
    April 27, 2008

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    not that bad

    none of sounds like really weird
    it flows really well
    the last stanza is my fave
    overall not that bad