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Lucy love

Girl I will be your anaesthetic for the pain

I will magnify your pleasures

Within your brain

Cupid sent me hear to keep you safe

The most important thing to me

Is that in love you never lose faith

If I could I would hold you

So you will never be neglected

If your soul is wounded girl

I will be there to make you feel resurrected

Sweet heart you have to understand

Where there is love there is power

I will be the light in your darkest hour

Girl these rhymes would not

Make sense with out your inspiration

I am forever thankful to Mother Nature for your creation

I will make love to you with my words alone

I am right by your side baby so you won’t ever be on your own 

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  • barleybabe
    August 31
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    well its nothing like that now

    i dont think this is even true now


    • Xmjx
      September 1
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      this one wasnt even written for u


  • Peachy
    July 17, 2008

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    I honestly like what this says, but at times it can definitely be a little choppy.

    "Cupid sent me hear to keep you safe"
    here
    Apart from that though, it was pretty good and said some magnificent things.


  • Falcon SilverWolf
    June 5, 2008
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    wo